Pitch Development Day: Idea Facts
Student
Name: Roxanne Meats
Genre:
(circle)
Comedy
Thriller
Drama
Location:
Public
Park
Characters:
1.
Jed- a young man, strong , takes risks, smart. He believed he was joining a
exclusive social society which ended up with the name of a “cult” by the media
causing him to want to leave.
2.Peter-
Jed’s younger brother, impressionable, easily lead, came to the commune with
Jed.
Goal:
Jed
wants to convince his brother to leave the commune with him.
Problem:
Convincing
his brother to leave with him turns into a argument as Jed convinced him to
join originally.
The
leader of the commune may lead to a problem as he will not want secrets about
the commune to come to light in the press.
Change:
Jed leaves
Peter to go back to the commune and gives up hope of his brother joining him
back into their normal lives.
The
Idea:
Jed
and his brother have lived in a commune together, they followed a leader there
during a time when the leader believed he could give a better life to the
people that followed him. Jed has asked Peter to meet him to convince him to
leave the commune and the life style they currently live to go back to there
family. The leader of the group believes the way that they live in the commune
is the “right” way of living and therefore people will all be able to ascend
into heaven.
The Pitch-
A man struggles to convince his younger brother to leave a cult commune. Will he succeed or abandon his brother?
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